Generally speaking, you did a good job. I just found one problem that a few sentences' intonation are wrong.
The beginning of our first sentence seems unclear.
Check pronunciation of words 'inspiration' and 'perspiration'.
the pace is to fast. the word nail, evading, full, policy are not so clear
Generally speaking, you did a good job. I just found one problem that a few sentences' intonation are wrong.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of our first sentence seems unclear.
ReplyDeleteCheck pronunciation of words 'inspiration' and 'perspiration'.
ReplyDeletethe pace is to fast. the word nail, evading, full, policy are not so clear
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