Content: Firstly, I summarized the author’s thesis that even though some bosses disagree with the people who listen to music at work, the fact is that music makes employees’ work more efficient. Secondly, I stated some main points of the article. And then, I talked about my opinions and concluded my ideas.
Nonverbal Behavior: I think I focused on my audiences at the most of time, but my expression is not good. I did some gestures in the video, but look like unnatural. In the future, I will add some facial expression to improve my speech. At the same time, I will practice how to use correct gestures.
Grammar, Pronunciation, Voice,& Pace I improved some pronunciation problems such as [ð] / [θ], but I still a lot of word stress problems. My voice sounds like unnatural. Maybe I need more practice.
Goals for Future Video Logs Firstly, I should learn how to use my facial expression and gesture through some practice. Second, I need to avoid grammar errors and make my voice more natural. I think I still have a lot of places need to improve.
Content:
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I summarized the author’s thesis that even though some bosses disagree with the people who listen to music at work, the fact is that music makes employees’ work more efficient. Secondly, I stated some main points of the article. And then, I talked about my opinions and concluded my ideas.
Nonverbal Behavior:
I think I focused on my audiences at the most of time, but my expression is not good. I did some gestures in the video, but look like unnatural. In the future, I will add some facial expression to improve my speech. At the same time, I will practice how to use correct gestures.
Grammar, Pronunciation, Voice,& Pace
I improved some pronunciation problems such as [ð] / [θ], but I still a lot of word stress problems. My voice sounds like unnatural. Maybe I need more practice.
Goals for Future Video Logs
Firstly, I should learn how to use my facial expression and gesture through some practice. Second, I need to avoid grammar errors and make my voice more natural. I think I still have a lot of places need to improve.