video log#1 （sean）

Reflection for video log #1

(Sean Shi)

Content:

Firstly, at the beginning of the video, I summarized the author’s thesis that music can change workers to be more productive. Secondly, I presented the author’s main ideas through 3 aspects: music can make workers more efficient and creative; music is applicable for all the workers; music can produce a private zone for every worker. At last, I concluded my response, and showed my own idea about this topic.

Nonverbal Behavior

In the video, I think I could focus on my audiences mostly. However, in the last part, I did not do it well. Furthermore, I think I need to improve my facial expression and gestures. In the video, my face was peaceful all the time. Maybe, I should add some facial expressions to help me to express. At the same time, I cannot find many proper body languages for this video. I really hope to learn more from the teachers about the skills of recording a video like this.

Grammar, Pronunciation, Voice, & Pace:

In the video, I have made some mistakes. Firstly, I have some grammar errors. I used “equality” as “quality”. I wanted to present the meaning of “quality” but I spoke “equality”. Furthermore, it should be “in the artistic field” rather than “in the art field”. Secondly, my pronunciation still has some problems. I cannot judge the stress well, especially in the word “communication”. Moreover, when I am reading the long words, I cannot read them well at the first time, such as “phenomenon”. Thirdly, I think my voice is not clear and relaxed enough. Sometimes, because of the tension, I cannot control my voice. At last, in my mind, my pace is acceptable.

Goals for Future Video Log Goals:

At first, I need to add more body language and facial expressions. I can learn this from my teachers and classmates. Then, I should do my best to avoid the grammar and pronunciation errors. Next time, I also need to improve my confidence in order to make my voice better.