I think you have a good pace, and nice improvement about many word pronunciations. And the intonations are not bad, there are some ups and downs in the sentence. Keep it.
Some words are not well-spoken, for example, you say "say[ei]ing" like "see[i]ing". Please pay attention to that. Secondly, the speed is a little slow, try to make it faster.
Sometimes, there are pauses between words in the middle of the sentence. Maybe, it is because of the unfamiliarity with the paragraph.
ReplyDeleteThe pronunciation of "thing" is incorrect.Need differentiate between "θ " and "ð"
ReplyDeletethe pronunciation of " communication " is not perfect . "n" is missed
ReplyDeletethe pronunciation of " even " is not perfect . we should pronounce "v" instead of "w"
ReplyDeleteI think you have a good pace, and nice improvement about many word pronunciations. And the intonations are not bad, there are some ups and downs in the sentence. Keep it.
ReplyDeleteSome words are not well-spoken, for example, you say "say[ei]ing" like "see[i]ing". Please pay attention to that.
ReplyDeleteSecondly, the speed is a little slow, try to make it faster.